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Wedding gown

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Shot of a recent Brides wedding gown
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I love how you bring out the goddess in your models. She looks gorgeous, her hair and pose I love.

But the rest of the composition really doesn't seem to work. At least not to me.
Perhaps if the tree was blurred a little more, emphasizing her, I can see the concept. But the tree branches and back area just seem 'off'.

Forgive my honesty and I only wish to say it because I've followed your work for a while now and feel I can comfortably give you a critique, even if I do not like doing them when they are not rosy. Just that you've excited and turned me on so many times, I can't help it.

If you would permit an amateur side comment, If you quarter cropped it and lost the background (from the letters 'say' to the top of those branches, I think it would super improve the photo, at least for me.

You make her look like a stunning goddess. I think because of that, all else around her look so bland.